Hey Harley, Mark here. I enjoyed your DLO and it was well explained. It was entertaining as well. Maybe next time you could say something in the DLO instead of Jason saying everything. And the background with the two people are quite distracting, and in you caption it says 'this is me and Jason's DLO' and it is spelt Jason and I's DLO. Good work!
Hi Harley Its Georgia I really liked this DLO and how it explained it . Next time I would probably say a bit more yourself instead of Jason and also maybe do more than one question but other then that it was great.
Hey Harley, Mark here. I enjoyed your DLO and it was well explained. It was entertaining as well. Maybe next time you could say something in the DLO instead of Jason saying everything. And the background with the two people are quite distracting, and in you caption it says 'this is me and Jason's DLO' and it is spelt Jason and I's DLO. Good work!
ReplyDeleteHi, harley I like how you used that technique maybe next time could you actaully do it not jason
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Hi Harley Its Georgia
ReplyDeleteI really liked this DLO and how it explained it . Next time I would probably say a bit more yourself instead of Jason and also maybe do more than one question but other then that it was great.